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Date: Mon Feb 7 1:52 PM, 2005
The lost hopes of my life



The lost hopes of my life


I am so confused about all the things that I do


Don’t know where can I go and what I have to do


Again,


And Everyday the same,


Watching the sunrise of many hopes


Then it become a sunset of hopeful person


A person who watch the moonlight of city so dead


Screaming to ears of stone: Where are the hopes?


Why I am the one to be the black bottle always chooses?


Chooses to fall with all those consumed memories!


Memories of yesterday wait others of the next days!


Many ideas inside my head,


Smothering by the tardiness of dummy’s persons


Don’t matter what I will say even what I will do


Because in the end…


They will force me to do what they want from me to do!


A perfect picture in my head of this world


Drawn by the lost hopes of my life


Colored by my dark burned blood


Fixed on flying walls inside empty rooms


Still watching this picture flying to the sky


Trying to jump in the air to catch it from going so far


But the ground pushes me back to leave it rising far and far!


Suddenly,


As I look to the sky…


I realize that this picture doesn’t matter


Because there is a picture up there more better!



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Date: Fri Apr 8 4:16 AM, 2005

 IF there is ALLAH nothing the lost hope


 


A Bee can eat


A bee can  give lesson abot life


Why?


because ALLAH want


A tree can`t  talk


 A tree is live


Why?


Because ALLAH`s love


I, U ?


of course more meaning


more hopes


can talk, can hear, can think


Why?


Because Allah more love, more believes to us


for responsible their life and earth life


Is there still no hope?


Read` La yukalifullahu nafsan illa wuts`aha laha ma ktsabat wa`alaiha ma`ktsabat...`


hope still there


waiting u to call




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Date: Fri Apr 8 1:07 PM, 2005

 


 Hi Jihad,,


 you didnt get what I mean in the end of my poem,,, everyone as he live in this world face some lost hope,,,,, but in the end as I said,,,,, there is a picture up there more better ,,, did you get what I mean by the picture up there..... I mean Allah...... so,,,, I didnt go far from what you said,,,,, but the fact that you didnt understand the meaning of "A picture up there more better"


 



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Date: Thu Apr 14 3:40 AM, 2005

Assalamu`alaikum..


May be `the fact that you didnt understand the meaning of "A picture up there more better` is true. but important that u know, i replied ur poem...because 1.u are moslem that know about ALLAH  and I think ur poem sends messages  a good picture who u are (moslem)from the end of ur poem.My poem just makes easier and simple to understand ur poem and give toward What is the meaning`A picture up there more better` as what i thought when read it. Of course it was spontaneusly. 2. my poem is not just for replies ur poem but for me & others. Ok, Thanks. Sorry if misunderstanding. Wassalam



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Date: Wed Jun 22 10:42 AM, 2005

i understood exactly what u ment khaled bcz uve just discribe what im going through with my best regards to jihad i agree with all ur words

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Date: Sat Jul 2 4:56 AM, 2005

assalamu`alaikum farah,


nice to meet u, thanks for ur comment,i`m happy u included to this forum, not quite again. and I think u make a good feels to this forum.oh ya, i`m sorry, introduce my self as jihad.


wassalam



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Date: Sat Jul 2 6:04 AM, 2005

thank u so much jihad its so nice thing to hear

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